Tuesday, November 24, 2009

Teaser Tuesday


Hey guys! It's Teaser Tuesday again! This is a scene kind of nearing the end. It's kind of long, so...

P.S. We're looking for betas after Thanksgiving. So if you're interested, we'll have a post next week asking for your emails :D Thank you for reading guys--you have no idea how much support we have received from your comments!


Thanks for reading :D

19 comments:

Kaitlin Ward said...

Love the tension between them.
Great teaser!

Krista Ashe said...

AUGH, this was so intense! I really love this story...if you need a beta reader later on, I'm here!

I love the last four lines about being a murder and then his last line...whoo! Awesome!

Great job!

VĂ©ro said...

this was my favorite teaser from you so far! Very intense!

Becca said...

Love the tension between them and those last few lines made me smile. :)

houndrat said...

Oh wow, I'm hooked! I'm not sure exaclty what's going on here, but I like the tension and sense of foreboding here. I'm also a sucker for a seemingly ruthless character showing a softer side, so woot!

Madeline-Rose said...

Wow, this one amazing teaser. I love the tension between them, it made me want to keep reading.

Amanda said...

Wow. Really. So good. I'm completely hooked. I need to know what's going on! Great teaser!

Mortem Twins said...

Thanks guys!

Karla said...

This was my fave teaser! Love this!

J.S. Wood said...

I've always loved this relationship and am even more curious now. Great job :)

Mortem Twins said...

Awh, thanks!!!

LizPage said...

I love the back and forth.
Depends on what kind of trouble...
Depends on what I'm confessing too.
Looking forward to more from this!!

Mortem Twins said...

Thanks, Liz!

Deniz Kuypers said...

I always look forward to reading your teasers. Great writing, great dialogue, and lots of tension. What more could a reader want? : )) But seriously, good job & keep it up!

Mortem Twins said...

Thanks Deniz!

corrinejackson said...

Great teaser! It feels like she is under a spell, and now we discover she may be dead. Interesting!

Amna said...

This is really interesting! Need more :)

Mortem Twins said...

thanks guys!

Paranormalchick said...

I love this story!! It's so my kind of thing :) I would love to read more!!

 
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