Ooh, this is really intense....you've a whole lot going on with the sibling dynamic. I'm wondering what's gonna happen now that she's upped the anty and he's called her a bitch. Eek, wonder if there's gonna be a fight!!
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Ooh, this is really intense....you've a whole lot going on with the sibling dynamic. I'm wondering what's gonna happen now that she's upped the anty and he's called her a bitch. Eek, wonder if there's gonna be a fight!!
"If I'm the black sheep, then what are you?" - LOVE that!
Crazy-awesome last line. Great job!!
Uh-ohhhhh. :/ She's done it now!!!
Love the cliffhanger! :D
OOOOOOO, loved the cliffhanger!
Great cliffhanger! And good sibling banter.
Love the confrontation!
Ooh. Tense scene!
And you tease with the cliffhanger :)
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