Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Teaser


Hey, guys, here goes another teaser. It's kind of rough but the scene is when Mary has some difficulties with her vicious little brother. :D

P.S. We'll try to read and comment all your teasers.

Here it goes:



Thanks for reading :D

8 comments:

Krista Ashe said...

Ooh, this is really intense....you've a whole lot going on with the sibling dynamic. I'm wondering what's gonna happen now that she's upped the anty and he's called her a bitch. Eek, wonder if there's gonna be a fight!!

Emilia Joyce Plater said...

"If I'm the black sheep, then what are you?" - LOVE that!
Crazy-awesome last line. Great job!!

Becca said...

Uh-ohhhhh. :/ She's done it now!!!

Love the cliffhanger! :D

Amna said...

OOOOOOO, loved the cliffhanger!

Kaitlin Ward said...

Great cliffhanger! And good sibling banter.

VĂ©ro said...

Love the confrontation!

Mortem Twins said...

thanks guys!!!

choco (In Which a Girl Reads) said...

Ooh. Tense scene!

And you tease with the cliffhanger :)

 
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