Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Teaser Tuesday!!!!

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Gosh, we've been noticing that the only thing we post is teaser tuesday :P We'll find soemthing creative soon, promise!!!

Anyways, this is a scene written just this weekend, so it's a little rough. Basically, Mary wakes up in her room and she finds something a little off. Okay, maybe a lot.



Thank you for reading :D

10 comments:

CupofDice said...

Great job! Gripped me till the end!

Karla said...

This is really good! It gripped me too!

characterize said...

ooooo! Very gripping indeed.
Great work :)

J.S. Wood said...

My heart is beating faster, great job. If you ever need a beta...

Madeline-Rose said...

Wow, that was just wow.

Yes, if you ever need a beta reader...hehehe.

But, wow, that was amazing. Your writing is very gripping.

Mortem Twins said...

wow, thanks guys!

and you two would be on our mind if we ever need one :P

Becca said...

Yes, very gripping. I also love your descriptions and the creepy vibe this gives. :D

Raven said...

Wow, this was really good. I love the descriptions and I can really see Faust just sitting there in pain...awe, I wonder what happened to him.

Keep writing!

Mortem Twins said...

Thank you for reading and commenting guys! we loved all your teasers!

Deniz Kuypers said...

Sorry for the late response, but I'm glad I took the time to catch up on your teaser this week. And wow, your blog looks awesome too! I'll be back next week for sure.

 
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