Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Teaser Tuesday!!!!


Okay, so, again, our post is a teaser tuesday. This scene was just written, so it hasn't been edited thoroughly. Ok, so Mary visits Dillon's house, and she's beginning to regret it. Maybe she shouldn't snoop around people's business...(Oh, yeah, it's pretty long)

P.S. We'll try and comment on everyone's teasers today!



Thanks you for reading :D


9 comments:

Becca said...

AAAGGHHH!! Great cliffhanger!!! :D

VĂ©ro said...

oh I agree with Becca! I like the Mrs Forbes character a lot!

CupofDice said...

Great job! Mrs Forbes can use some counseling, I think. Then again, the girl had it coming, rummaging in her dresser lol. :D Loved it!

CoryLeslie said...

I see a theme of cliffhangers in Teaser Tuesdays. Nice work! A mom who doesn't look her age handling a box cutter while talking fate. Not something you read everyday.

choco said...

Omgoshhhh! How could you end it right there?

Great teaser :D

Mortem Twins said...

thanks guys!

Deniz Kuypers said...

Nicely done! Lots of tension and lots of questions for the reader. I really like how mysterious and menacing Mrs. Forbes is.

Mortem Twins said...

Thanks Deniz!

Karla said...

AHH! Mrs. Forbes is so scary! Nice tension. You're killing me with the cliffhanger! I swear, talk about dangling me on the edge of a "cliff" haha. Lame.. I know.

 
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