Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Teaser Tuesday

Okay. We know we've been sucking A LOT when it comes to posting, considering our last post was December 30th. Twenty-six days ago. Yeah. But we've been really busy and we're just trying to figure out what to do with our WIP's and stuff.

But don't worry, to anyone who still follows here. Today we actually have something(YAY!). We're still working on Glacialis, so right now, we'll post something from a new WIP of Serena's temporarily called SLOW.

It's about a close-minded boy. It's about a different kind of girl. And it shows what happens when you choose to make a difference rather than sticking to the status-quo. And of course, we can't write anything our genre yet, so there're a little bit of magical, mythological elements to it. We'll post more of it soon, along with Selena's WIP temporarily called WRITTEN.

It's in the guy's point-of-view, and his name's Drew (it's kind of long and rough, so we apologize):

Thanks for reading, guys!

16 comments:

Race said...

I love the imagery of the cig.

V.M.Pettingill said...

ooooh very interesting.

Yay for new WIPs!!

Bee said...

I think you've nailed it. So, so good!
Great opening. HAVE to know what happens next :D

Annie McElfresh said...

Your writing always hooks me! Your dialog is on point and your characters are always fiesty!! Great start, I look forward to reading more!! :D

lynkay said...

I was hooked from the moment I raed this.

One word. Two syllables. Seven letters.

Shotgun.


Great imaginary!

lynkay said...

LOL I meant Imagery. *shakes head*

Little Miss Allicatt said...

AMAZING

TENSION.

I'm telling you, these teasers get better each time. Absolutely. Loved. It.

Glen Akin said...

I have to say, your dialogue is major kick-ass and your writing has a way of hooking readers. Plus, wtf is with the ending? What or who did your MC see? And why did Jo have to die?

parametric said...

I really, really like this. The opening is punchy, the characterisation is good and I like the dialogue. Great job. :)

Amna said...

Great opening, I was hooked immediately.

I thought the pacing was great and I was disappointed when it ended :(

Mortem Twins said...

Wow, I didn't expect so many positive comments! Thanks so much you guys!

bclement412 said...

I want to keep reading! Please let next Tuesday come faster! Awesome snippy :D

Sarah said...

GREAT dialogue.

Karla Calalang said...

Awesome dialogue. Awesome MC. Awesome teaser! WOOT!

Eva said...

I was on Writer Water Cooler and watched the book trailer you had tagged in your signature line. It looks really good, just wanted to stop by and tell you I enjoyed it.

Mortem Twins said...

Well thank you Eva !
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